i know someone like trevor... the closet partier. this is really how it is, and i like the sense of authenticity i get from reading this.
i'm glad you updated. it seems like a promising story. =]
keep it up!

i enjoy this, you have my attention :)

I really like this.

It sums up summer and the feelings there and the truth behind it all.

It makes you almost smell the sweet smoke that we all seem to be enveloped in in those times, the laughter and the bitter liquor. The honesty we all 'forget' in the morning.

Brilliant.

oo, i like this already. your style is blunt and to the point, talking from a well spoken mouth it seems, a true storyteller. this has so much nostalgia. sometimes i wish i grew up back then when everything was simpler, where facebook didn't determine your popularity, and where conversations were real people talking on a phone.

if you decide to take this anywhere, i think it could be good. still i think it stands on it's own very well too.

nice work, keep writing!

"we’re young, it’s summer, anything goes"
goddamn anthem material right there.

nirvana reference/link- beautiful, perfect.
is this going further?