Wow it almost seemed sweet at first, but it turned so bitter, and then almost sweet at the end with rememberance. Your writing is absolutely wonderful.
~Lessa

"I can imagine that the body violating my essence is you." What in interesting line. I love that you made the distinction between 'the body' and one's 'essence.' It's fascinating to think that one's body has the ability to 'damage' one's soul. The line, "We both glanced at lilting butterflies," is both gentle, sexual, and profound, as it prophesizes the 'change' that's about to occur in the future, since this section was a memory. Keep up the good work. :)