About time you wrote something. I'm still trying to find time to write. I liked the ending and keep up the good work, cuz.

i'm a little confused on this chapter. seems like the vampire thing cam out of nowhere:S

The end was strange but I did like it. I think I know who "She" is. Sorry that it took me a while to read the last half. I was busy piecing together my latest story to put on here. Nice going, cuz!

I liked this chapter and it reminds me of a lot like Twilight but it's similar. Good job on this chappie. I will be posting my next chapter by today.

Interesting chapter and good job.

Good job on the chapter but this one chapter reminds me of something.

Finally! I have gotten around to review this chapter. I like the cliffhanger that you wrote on the end. I think I figured it out only a little bit.

The next chapter seems like it will be really interesting. I will read the next chapter ASAP. Sorry that I am making you waiting longer for my next chapter. I'm trying to make sure that I have a good story line, but don't worry on my computer I am about ready to type on page 3. :)

hey, nice story, lots of potential :)

may i just suggest though that you lengthen your sentences a little? you could just link shorter sentences together, for example:

i took this time to make my escape. i wobbled to the door.

becomes:

i took this time to make my escape and wobbled to the door.

sweet little story though, i like tallulah!

i love this story nice job!

This chapter was interesting and a good read. Good job, cuz.

I liked this chapter a lot. It was really entertaining.

This story is still getting interesting good job.

The nightmare sequence was terrifying, and it was written wonderfully! Is Dark related to Keir? I can't wait to find out.

Oh Sweet Baby Jesus!

The last chapter is by far one of my favorites, and I felt more of the connection between Tali and her brother, Tahigwa, and the relationship between Tail and Dark.

Although maybe, Dark is a shape shifter or something because he also called her 'poppet.'

Anyway,

It was excellent and I can't wait to hear more.

-Tessa :D