|Reviews for The Guardian & The Destroyer|
| ShyGirl2008 11/8/11 . chapter 16
About time you wrote something. I'm still trying to find time to write. I liked the ending and keep up the good work, cuz.
| RoGo 7/18/11 . chapter 15
i'm a little confused on this chapter. seems like the vampire thing cam out of nowhere:S
| ShyGirl2008 12/26/10 . chapter 15
The end was strange but I did like it. I think I know who "She" is. Sorry that it took me a while to read the last half. I was busy piecing together my latest story to put on here. Nice going, cuz!
| ShyGirl2008 12/25/09 . chapter 14
I liked this chapter and it reminds me of a lot like Twilight but it's similar. Good job on this chappie. I will be posting my next chapter by today.
| ShyGirl2008 10/25/09 . chapter 13
Interesting chapter and good job.
| ShyGirl2008 10/9/09 . chapter 12
Good job on the chapter but this one chapter reminds me of something.
| ShyGirl2008 10/1/09 . chapter 11
Finally! I have gotten around to review this chapter. I like the cliffhanger that you wrote on the end. I think I figured it out only a little bit.
| ShyGirl2008 9/30/09 . chapter 10
The next chapter seems like it will be really interesting. I will read the next chapter ASAP. Sorry that I am making you waiting longer for my next chapter. I'm trying to make sure that I have a good story line, but don't worry on my computer I am about ready to type on page 3. :)
| BoxedxxxInnocence 9/27/09 . chapter 11
hey, nice story, lots of potential :)
may i just suggest though that you lengthen your sentences a little? you could just link shorter sentences together, for example:
i took this time to make my escape. i wobbled to the door.
i took this time to make my escape and wobbled to the door.
sweet little story though, i like tallulah!
| Cornilias 9/6/09 . chapter 1
i love this story nice job!
| ShyGirl2008 9/2/09 . chapter 9
This chapter was interesting and a good read. Good job, cuz.
| ShyGirl2008 8/24/09 . chapter 8
I liked this chapter a lot. It was really entertaining.
| ShyGirl2008 8/24/09 . chapter 7
This story is still getting interesting good job.
| BellsAndRoses 8/23/09 . chapter 8
The nightmare sequence was terrifying, and it was written wonderfully! Is Dark related to Keir? I can't wait to find out.
| instantreplay 8/23/09 . chapter 8
Oh Sweet Baby Jesus!
The last chapter is by far one of my favorites, and I felt more of the connection between Tali and her brother, Tahigwa, and the relationship between Tail and Dark.
Although maybe, Dark is a shape shifter or something because he also called her 'poppet.'
It was excellent and I can't wait to hear more.