this story is great!! better than frosted flakes!! corny i know. but i want you to update!!

So I decided to read another one of your stories and so far I've yet to be disappointed. I'm looking forward to reading more!

P.S. Orion and Randi...REALLY DO NEED TO BE TOGETHER! Age doesn't matter! It's all about how they really feel for each other!

Anytime! ^-^ Lol. I honestly love animals, tried to pick up one today actually but it wouldn't come up to me... Hopefully he/she didn't get hit by a car =(. ^-^ I really enjoy how things are playing out. Like how you still kept real human emotion in it. Alot of times people don't think of that. They don't really notice that most people are going to be weirded out by killing someone. Even if they are a weird animal-person-thing. Lol. I love the "Wolf mating season" statement. It all shows how you are tying their animal parts into everything they do. Not just a few certain points.((Plus it would make for a pretty good excuse. Lol.)) You always remind us how normal they aren't even if they are still partially kinda human and have human feelings. Can't wait to read your next chapter!

Interesting concept, much more plausible than other stories I've read. I want to see where this story is going.

Pretty good chapter, but ugh! I do NOT want her to fall in love with Orion. It's way too weird... *Shudders*

I love this story! ^-^ I love this chapter. It didn't really get anywhere, except for a few small details, but the action and everything was perfect. You don't want huge leaps every chapter. I don't think you are going too fast with this at all. I am an action lover though, so that could have something to do with it. ((that's why I didn't like the new HP movie. Lol)) But I am a big fan of all of your stories. I love the Ledger stories also. ((Even your teen angst is amazing. Which is an easy subject to flip into annoying so congrats on that.)) You are an amazing writer. You should really, honestly be publishing this stuff.

A pretty good tale so far. Nothing major that I can see wrong with it, and an interesting idea...

Looking forwards to seeing how things develop...

Spawny

WO yet again an awesome chapter and FINALLY more people have decided to read and review ... took them long enough too. the story in some ways reminds me of x-men lol like the experiments and abilities but thats cool, keep writing and i can't wait for the next chapter :) :D :p p.s. AWESOME STORY!!

Awesome idea. I recall a few words that confused me in a couple chapters. I suggest reading over them and editing them if you notice a mistake. Example: "First Squad, meet Easy Squad." I think that was supposed to be Third, not First.

Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm liking it. So far it's pretty good. I like how you always have something new in each chapter, how you always introduce something that wasn't expected. I also like how there's little subplots, like Randi's problems with Brad and how she has a bad relationship with her mother. It keeps things exciting. All in all, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey, yet again an awesome chapter, it has a really unique plot line, and of course i am going to stick with the series, you have me hooked after the first chapter! :) Really can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon, and everyone who hasn't read this dosen't know what their missing out on!! :) :p :D

Awesome chapter, i sorta sense that randi is similar to sydney and thats cool, i dont know why but i find them similar, very nice sorta laid-back characters. Anyway great chapter can't wait for the next and i don't know what is wrong with people! Why hasn't anyone else reviewed oh well tough luck for them they don't know what there missing! Please update soon! :p :D

Awesome story and i good plot. It's like no other story i've read and i can't wait to read the next chapter :) You're a very diverse writer this story is so different from ledger. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :) oh and yay me first review WO :p