quite an amusing read. i enjoy reading your stories!

I like it, it was very good- very good. Very well written- nice use of vocabulary :) I wish fiction press had a like button

'wow..great story..so cute and sweet..love it.! :)) by the way, I sign-up to your homepage..my FFN penname here and display name there are same..so please accept my request so that i can read your other stories..! :)) thanks..and have a nice day.! :))

Cute story - was Ryan always this charming? haha. I know this is just a short story, but I guess a little more about why Ryan became so enamored with Rachael in particular would have been nice as well. And also as to why Rachael liked him, beyond him being so ridiculously charming and attractive, haha.

Cute cute though :) And so interesting to see Ry actually turning down sex! Haha. But good too.

- Alyssa

aww such a cute ending! This was a great short story ]

woah that was unexpected, poor Rachael

Aww! That was so cute! Nice job.

Hi Chelle,

I just came upon your stories and love them! But when I tried to go to your homepage for your completed works, the link is broken. Could you please update it/send it to me? thanks!

I love this story, it's hilariously charming. ;)

so cute! I love your writing

This was very sweet, Rachael is a unique and interesting character and Ryan is one of my favourites, because he's so fun and cheeky :D but he's not just the typical playboy, and i can't quite work him out sometimes, like the whole buying his sister romance books thing, but i love him. :D

I'm not really a short story person, but you pulled this off well, it was just enough, and a nice taster of how their relationship started. However i thought the reading erotic literature to a bunch of women, as amusing as it was, was a little unrealistic, i dont know any libraries that would allow that to be read aloud. Also although i loved the was rachael apoligised at the end and the way he reacted to it, i just didnt like the last few lines about not cheating, it was a little too cheesy for me.

It was so cute that I was smiling away for the last chapter! I like Suzie too!

this story waz amazing but i wished u kept going

Aw that story was so cute. Ryan and Rachael should make a cute couple. Yay for cute and happy endings

HI!

Aw I love this story, short and sweet! :D Rachael is alot more awesome than I thought she was hehe she's wicked! lol

Well have a gd week!

I'm waiting for the latest S chapter u just posted to let me read it cause it's being stupid nd saying it still needs to load :(

BYE!

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