Nice! I really liked how you crafted this OneShot! Aside from ocassional punctuational and grammatical mistakes, I enjoyed your story. The characters seemed very real and not overly cliche. On to my favorites!

that was good, you are really a talented writer. this story is well build and clear. the caracter are loveable.

good job !

I really liked the pace of this one shot. I was reading a lot of the one shots for the contest and I really thought that yours was one of the best.

A lot of the others seemed to be: okay, the characters hate each other...they still hate each other...wait, what? Why are they making out? I thought that they hated each other?

Yours built up a bit of a relationship with Kevin and Julia. The apology was good and then there was a passage of time and then they fell in love. The pace was right.

Great job!

Haha that's so sweet!!

xx
Ali

Very nice story! No wonder you won the contest! I really enjoyed that you didn't date the beginning of their hatred back to high school. And the reason you created for their not liking each other very much... it was great! Very good idea!

Again, very nice and I enjoyed reading it.

KayJuli

Loved it!
Congrats for winning =D

The characters were well-rounded as a whole. The supportive character who seemed every bit as 3-D and large-as-life as Julia was Mr. Dryer, doubtless. Richard Dryer is about the "dryest" name one can think of, I suppose :)
But the ending was sudden and rather flat, when the whole perfect schema was revealed - how Kevin actually LOVED her and her writing underneath all the gazes of hatred. It was, well, really rather quick. And the last few paragraphs went on to straight love is really rushing it.
Otherwise, I did love this story! You have a knack for moving things along and catching the attention of the reader. MY fav. line was, from R. Dryer: “Well. Regardless, perhaps you should give me the actual history now, since I refuse to have you dropped because some hot-shot new author thinks he’s the second coming.”

I loved this. It was really adorable and it was refreshing to me. There so many stories out there about high school teens and having rival problems turn romance, but with this scenario, it seemed so real and possible.
And it's really a cliche, not too much.

Wonderfully written. Good job :)

seriously...this is aweseome...kudos to your choice of words and description, and the transition/development of their relationship

awesome story! so well written, i really loved the characters!! i loved the story!!

OMG it's so cute. I love how this is different because it's the girl that hurts the guy first.

Aw. :3

*ahem*

Now, let me be sensible.

Excellent flow -- check. Great character development -- check. Grammar -- check. Spelling -- check. Everything else -- check, check, check. To sum up, well done; I'm rather tired, else I might pick it apart and look for those tiny errors that sometimes we overlook (though I doubt I'd find any), so you'll have to put up with a one word summary. Ie, brilliant.

Loved it.

Cute but not sickeningly so, humourous, believable, everything a good story should be and definitely one of the gems on this site.

Top effort, incredibly well done!

- Naranne

love this.
:)

A great and well-written one-shot.

you totally deserved to be the winner!
I'm grinning like an idiot right now, my mom probably thinks that I'm crazy...

Great one-shot!