awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww super awesum :)

I adore this. Absolutely and completely.

awesome

Haha, beware of what you ask for, was the first thing I thought of when I read the last line.

This was super cute, and for a minute I thought that you were going to write it so that Naomi did fall for Jared.

Love the story!

*Ngoc1231*

i love this: "It was eighteen years ago. I got over it in college"

Lol, cute ending. I loved it. Well done!

loved it!

sorry can't comment more...gotta rush!

Ri

I love it. Nice ending you got there, seriously!

He really did man up! :D

lol! i love your note! "review, por favor?" good way to show what you have learned. that was arealy dumb thing to coment about (im talking about the por facor thing not the story) but yeah that's me. LOVE THE STORY! love the apple jucie thing that was cute. GRA

XD HAHA. 18 years worth of sexual frustration! dang that must be alot! ;P

thanks for this oneshot! :D

Hahaha apple juice ROX!

I love ur story especially the ending LOL

um um um um ok im tryin not to say anything stupid but its kida unny but nice at the same time

:)

beautiful.

Hahahah...well, if u were a guy and a girl asked u to "man up?" after u've confessed ur feelings to said girl...what would u do? hahahaha...nice one!

Applause!

Oh gosh. I don't know what keeps taking me so long to review stuff. I really don't know. I think I accidentally skipped it, or something, because the link was purple like it is if you already visited the site. Does that make sense? Probably not, I tend to make things confusing. But I really liked this oneshot. You should've won! I loved the whole hate-love relationship (that was part of the rules, so I guess that makes sense). And it's long too! Hooray!

I'm thinking about making a romance story, but I don't really know if romance is my thing. What do you think? I'm thinking of playing with the brother's best friend cliche.

But seriously. You should make a story with more than one chapter! It'd be great, I'm telling you.

-Leanne