lol! i love your note! "review, por favor?" good way to show what you have learned. that was arealy dumb thing to coment about (im talking about the por facor thing not the story) but yeah that's me. LOVE THE STORY! love the apple jucie thing that was cute. GRA

XD HAHA. 18 years worth of sexual frustration! dang that must be alot! ;P
thanks for this oneshot! :D

Hahaha apple juice ROX!!
I love ur story especially the ending LOL

um um um um ok im tryin not to say anything stupid but its kida unny but nice at the same time

:)


beautiful.

Hahahah...well, if u were a guy and a girl asked u to "man up?" after u've confessed ur feelings to said girl...what would u do? hahahaha...nice one!!

Applause!!

Oh gosh. I don't know what keeps taking me so long to review stuff. I really don't know. I think I accidentally skipped it, or something, because the link was purple like it is if you already visited the site. Does that make sense? Probably not, I tend to make things confusing. But I really liked this oneshot. You should've won! I loved the whole hate-love relationship (that was part of the rules, so I guess that makes sense). And it's long too! Hooray!
I'm thinking about making a romance story, but I don't really know if romance is my thing. What do you think? I'm thinking of playing with the brother's best friend cliche.
But seriously. You should make a story with more than one chapter! It'd be great, I'm telling you.
--Leanne

Oh. That was so...-sighs wistfully- cute!
I mean, you know me, don't have many words in my vocab.
They're restricted to 'cute', 'sweet' and...'cute!' (With an exclamation point you see!) I heart this! Hope you win!! =D
Chat soon lovely,
Hope
xx

That's amazing

OHH MY WORD! WONDERFUL LADY WONDERFUL! I LOVE THIS ONE! ITLL BE MY MOST FAVE!

I think I would've liked this more if we had seen more of them in their adult years, and there were times when she felt really high school (when she wasn't), but other than that, I liked this. (: I'm very glad the wicked monkey added this to our c2. (:

Sorry I didn't do this before, but I wanted you to know I noticed the change and it was a great edit. It flowed naturally from his apology and actually gave a reason (however flawed his little boy mind was;)!) for his behavior. Thanks for listening and improving your story.

Awwh Ian is so sweet :3

This is all I have to say: OHMYGOSHYOUWROTEMYLIFE!EXCEPTTHEENDPARThasn'tHAPPENED YET.
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They were pretty cute together. I love that; man up. Ha-ha. I want to tell someone that. Good effort, and good luck with your entry :p I'm entered in this too, just have to revise mine a little and it'll be up too. So luck! Hope you do well. xoxo