I really like this. It's short, but that's what drabbles are. It has me intrigued and I want to know more :)

This was good. I agree with what sophiesix says - this would really work well as a prologue. It will definitely turn into a fantastic story, if you continue. :D

I think this would work really well as a prologue, but then I'm not heaps familiar with drabbles. It's intriguing, it hooks you in, but leaves an awful lot of unanswered questions :)