Haha holy shit I almost cried.

It's not nearly as language fun and experimental as your other pieces but goddamn is this refreshing. No idea why I haven't read it earlier but I'm loving the to the point narrative. Very clear, very laid out to dry kind of feeling.

I can relate to the feelings for sure and I've always enjoyed it when I read something that encapsulates one of my heartstrings in such a poetic way. Some of it is a little *true* "and then" but if you want an indepth critique shoot me a line and I'll give this a little more time. At the moment though, I'm handing you a bizarre, out of the blue review based on my gut reaction that says this is a winner.

Midnight

You have such a way with taking the ordinary and making it mean a lot more. "I could count the number of times I saw you
in the next ten months on one row of teeth
and hated how teeth always reminded me of you" I loved that line.

"Heartstring whiplash." Wow! How creative!

"I regret forgetting how your fingerprints felt." This line is both delicate and lovely.

"I stole moments from your life." Shocking. Powerful.

"That silence had no home in you." God, I may very well start crying--this line is so moving! The angst! *clutches heart*

Keep up the great work. :)

So beautiful... I love your poetry. This one struck a nerve because it sort of applies to something I'm feeling. Not quite, but I suppose it can't ever apply directly unless you are the one writing it. Well. I loved this. And you should most definitely keep writing. Beautiful work.