Whoa. I just read that whole story in one-and-a-fourth sittings. lol. To be honest, I didn't want to keep reading at first, but I couldn't stop, and I finished it.

It's put together very well. You have a lot of talent. Trust me. It takes a lot to keep me focused for more than five minutes, and I think three hours qualifies as an exception.

Don't stop writing! I never would have guessed this was based on something true, but I guess you can be surprised every day. You're right, though, about the happy ending. Mostly right, anyway--the majority of people want a happy ending.

I was terrified that you were going to kill AJ in the end because I read a story with a sudden accident--kind of similar in idea--and both main characters were killed. Needless to say, I was so relieved when AJ woke up and stayed up.

Great story. You have skill, for sure.

-GH*

It was a nice ending but not nearly as exciting as the other chapters. Amazing that this was based on real life.

HOLY CRAP!
i couldnt stop reading this story your so good!

OMG OMG OMG- i know uv finished writing this story but can i just say this story made me CRY!
im still bawling right now...i think iv only ever cried in one other book (new moon)
like...WOW!
whoa...im gonna read all ur other stories now
amazing...the BEST!

you may not have liked the chapter but its good. youve got a good hook right after the prolog. your doing great i cant wait to finish

unbelievably amazing.
i can't seem to describe how fantastic and lovely and wonderful and stunning this is.
thank you so much for sharing this story with us.
i've cried, laughed, blushed (at the s** scene. heh), and fell in love with these characters.
this story was a joy to read. and i am in complete awe.
i adore every single chapter, and wow. you're going to go so far in writing (and just plain life!) and i can't wait until i pick up one of your novels one day and say "i read her story before! OMG!". i'm going to go crazy when that happens. hehe.
but really, i just like this story so much.
it made me sad to see it end, but i'm going to read your other stories soon too.
lovelyawesomegreatincrediblemindblowing story.
and if you don't know how striking this was by now, then IT WAS VERY STRIKING. =P
- dorkiee [!] (:

God, I wish life was like a book/story. Like you said everybody wants a happy ending. Finally done reading all of your stories. I have to say you are one of my favorite authors. If you ever published anything I would definately buy it. Ok, well, this story, I really liked your characters. They had a very good dynamics with each other. Oh, and I love the reference to Twilight. I absoluetly love that series. ;) Until your next update...

That story was freaking amazing! I could not get off fictionpress for DAYS trying to finish this story. It is so so so amazing and now my friend wants to read it because I gushed so hard about it. I love love love it!

i just wanted to say that Texans don't have those kind of souther accents.i remember when my friend brianna first moved here from Chicago she thought everyone was like a cowboy or something so for her school clothes she bought jeans cowboy boots and flannal shirts with a hat.it was hilarious when she told me. but yeah other that that(didn't really bug me just wanted to let you know)it was an amazing story.

i fucking love your story. its made me cry not once but twice. its awesome and i really look up to the real life AJ for not letting him affect her, shes strong. so tell her i said so.:)

:O I wasn't really pining for a sequel since i haven't finished this story yet but... :O it was based on your life? So far this story is just too cute and I'm really disappointed that it didn't work out in real life.

That was the saddest, most dramatic, most heart wrenching first chapter I've ever read. I love this story already :)

i enjoyed you belong with me as much as i liked love game. your writing is so fun to read and realistic. i think it's really cool that this was based off of your own life and real people. i've always wanted to have an older brother that i could hang out with and that would be protective of me so i loved how close aj was to hunter and parker. even though carter pissed me off a lot in this story, i'm glad he and aj ended up together and that she was still able to be friends with trey. and congratulations to the real life aj for getting over her real carter so that she'll be able to find someone that treats her better and realizes what he has when he's with her :-)

whoa. angst story.
YES YES IMMA READ! :D

ABSOLOUTLY LUVED THAT CHAPTER!!
Carter is so sweet, I luve him
You are a fantastical writer can't wait to read more :)