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avanfos 2009-06-30 . chapter 1
This is a good piece. I like the plot, and the ending is cute. I know my share of couples who argue simply for the fact of being right. Maybe flesh it out a little? See if you can grow the situation. Introduce more background information, setting etc.

-Avanfos
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