I like it a lot.

Meredith, i love this poem. :) haha i liked it so much im speecheless.

This is Miranda! :D

Oh my gosh, Meredith. I remember the first poem I ever read of yours, Hey There Hero. I thought your work was amazing then, and now here you are a year later, still blowing me away! The flow of your poem feels very quick and almost frantic (well, maybe frantic isn't quite the right word, but whatever)- at least that's how I read it. I liked the feel to it. The rhymes were simple and not at all cheesy. I love this poem. :)