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a silenced revolution 2009-09-25 . chapter 1
a message about the mental captivity of religion?
i don't know if it's what you intended, but that's what i got from it.

anyway, nice visuals and word choice. i like how it starts in a fairly pleasant and innocent tone, but turns pessimistic at the end.
Isca 2009-07-04 . chapter 1
"Taking us to a place of reflections." Well that's interesting. Usually windows mimic mirrors and allow us to see ourselves, but no, here you suggest that one must look beyond the window/mirror in order to see our 'true' reflection. That's wonderfully profound. :)
Hollis Winter-Summers 2009-07-01 . chapter 1
I liked it alot!! =D My favourite lines:

"The cage of the cathedral
Wraps its way around our trapped selves"

Awesome poem!
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