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Isca 2009-07-04 . chapter 1
"Flames pouring from unlit fires." How contradictory. I like it. It's rather philosophical and thought-provoking.

I like that the choppiness of the poem mimics the abstractness of the painting that inspired this piece.

Keep up the good work. :)
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 2009-07-01 . chapter 1
Very dark, but still beautiful and descriptive:) The words painted a very clear picture.
Awesome job!
Hollis Winter-Summers 2009-07-01 . chapter 1
I liked this one alot too! Abstract art is so interesting! =D

"Faceless figures
Scrambled across a night scene"

Best lines. Loved it so much Im favouriting! ;)
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