haha, this made me laugh

Haha, oh goodness. This is quite random indeed, but you somehow managed to make it work. It has a theme, which is slightly frightening. Love it. Keep writing! :)

Thanks all for the reviews. I will continue the story shortly :)

I enjoyed this greatly ^.^

That made complete sense, except for the entire story. Good job with the randomness.

that was great..A little hard to follow but great