"The lobster crawls back up my esophagus." I literally squirmed. That's how powerful and chilling the imagery in this line is. :D

Beautiful,

It's very light but very serious.

Love what you did with the whole lobster, crawling back up.

The idea was very clever.

Lovely work. :)

rolliepollie44

jiminey, and of course that's

a good thing...crud, i wish

_i'd_ thought to use the

word 'esophagus' in a poem.

now it's too late, at least

for seven or eight months.