Aw this is so sad but so sweet. I like the repetition of the word someday, almost like you have to keep reminding yourself that in the future things will be better. And the second stanza was cute nice descriptions of being in love.

"but the rightness
can't erase the pain."
-Great ending to this piece!

This is so true. I like the last stanza. This is short but full of emotion and so honest. Well done!

this was amazing; i've felt exactly like this before.
you've explained it so well. it's hard at first, but one you know that afterwards is an okay place to be, it's perfect =]

k.X