That was intense. But wow, you're creative. That's some backstory for the Mouse Trap. It all makes sense, now, though. In a sad and rather twisted way.

Randall? Billy Craig? is definitely an intriguing character. Despite the fact that I really shouldn't be able to relate to him in any way at all, I find myself empathizing with him completely while I read your story.

Your writing is pretty damn amazing.

Thanks for sharing.

OMFG !!
This is such a ... ah, words fail me.
At first, after reading the mouse trap, I thought, man this is sick. But then curiosity won, because all through the Mouse Trap there was a depth, a hint of logic behind the game, a logic that defied pain and spoke of pleasure, love even.
So curiosity won and I started reading The Naming of Cats.
Now I am so much in awe I can't wait to review until I read the Maneki Cat. I just had to do it now.
But I can hardly wait to the last of the trilogy.
You are a master of skillfuly showing us the workings of the human mind and it's emotions. You made the Cat just so I can't hate him. Furthermore, I understand his reasoning, it is perfect and flawless. A healing dance he designed himself; just like life is supposed to be.
Thank you! It's beautiful

Okay... all my questions answered :D Slightly creepy, but not too ad... and Backwater has some background :D Love it!

I really enjoy this story, well written and a very interesting storyline! Please write more ^.^ please please please please. xD enough fangirl begging...but seriously well written and good details, not to much not to little.
=D

perfection.
what more can be said?


ooh except; purrfection.

XD