It was predictable, but still a very fun reading. :)

Very well written. I started reading and couldn't stop. Keep up the good work.

i loved reading this, it was so cute! Thanks for the story =D

A very fun read.

Hey.

Naw, once you said it was cliche in your authors review, I sought to prove you wrong.

It was great, but short to the point when I clicked for chapter six, I went: Aw great, she's going to die, isn't she?

Then I thought, perhaps she meant the tragic cliche, not the happy ending, riding with the sunset cast across the plain...

If I may criticize, on one of your chapters, she calls him, "Romeo" sarcastically, I'm not sure if that's a proper comparison, if Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet was a popular play at the time.

And at some moments in Delilah's conversation with Jonah (love her name by the way), she mentions he's a two-bit outlaw, but he uses highly educated words in his speech. Not like I'm any better though.

You wrote an overall wonderful story, I think XD.

Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress.

This was a very cute read! Was Jonas also based only your brothers as well? BTW, what's wrong with cliches? I love them from time to time. I also love that is was a western. Haven't read one of those in awhile.

You write super fast. I've noticed you've been writing all these stories and I thought I needed to catch up since I last read one of your other stories. Anyway, my first thought when she met Jonas was: "Really?" lol. You never know what you're going to get when you marry a man you don't know. He could have been an abuser, but I guess that mischief in his eyes told her he was harmless.

I definitely didn't expect Delilah's back story. I thought that was original. It wasn't the usual thing. I was pretty satisfied with what we learned about Delilah. But I really wanted to know more about the mischievious Jonas. I really wanted to know why the son of a doctor (a respectable profession) became an outlaw or at least a wannabe outlaw. Is his parents still alive? I know it was a short story, but I still wish there was more. Sequel anyone? lol.

I guess I wanted to know where they ended up. Did they go where his bro was or his cousins? Did they have kids? I guess I wanted to see more than just one moment of happiness for Delilah. It would have been interesting if Delilah was settled somewhere happy and some face from the past showed up again. That's what I would have wished for in a sequel, but I guess if you don't write it I'll just get caught up with your other story eventually. I read this now because it was pretty short, but now I wish it was longer. Isn't that ironic?

I love that you wrote a 22,0 word story to take a break from other writing! My gosh! I can't even imagine. This was a very, very cute story. Cliche and predictable, just as you said, but still sweet and touching. I truly enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing your talent and ideas with us! :)

whoa This is a great story it was funny and you mentioned Jesus which was one of my favorite parts Good work :D

Hehehe...I liked it =) I love westerns, lol.

nice. very cute. i would review more and longer, bu i have to go. :)

eventhough it' a cliche.. but a like it.

aw, jonas is so sweet!

and he better be okay. getting shot is totally uncool, just when he's about to kiss her. way uncool.

Dun dun dun...

You wrote 220 words as a light quick read? (*begins to laugh*) I like it so far, though. Jonas is kind of funny and D is intreguing.