"I thought better of you." Aww. That's so sad. It's horrible that this boy only that of you as a 'whore' and talked behind your back. I'm sorry to hear that hun. Keep writing. :)

I was right in my review of your last poem, when I wrote that you seemed to have more to say about the break-up. You express the anger and dispair clearly, with just a hint at the end that you'll recover and start the painful climb back up to hope and good spirits,'

this is an excellent break-up poem. you really put anger into it. and you use lots of description.