 Kathleen Daniels 2009-07-16 . chapter 1Haha. That was a funny one, thank you for writing it. =)
I was surprised at the line 'our goodbye was his cigarette break' because I know how much you despised cigaretts- so by the time I got to the third stanza, I had to laugh, because then you using the line made perfect sense.
That was a rather amusing, and very good poem. I'm glad I read it. |