| Reviews for Darkened Road |
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Kinna 7/4/09 . chapter 1This is a very comforting poem. FI was only slightly confused at this part, "With nothing to comfort" because it makes more sense to have the word 'me' on the end, unless the speaker wants to comfort someone else. My favourite lines and images are also same as GirlWithTheBrokenSmile. It was an illuminating thought and image, pun intended. _ |
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 7/3/09 . chapter 1I had a dream similar to this a while back, only there was no light:( Loved the lines: "The yellow flood of light Shows that the ground is rocky Only where my feet think They need to go But they don't" Beautifully done! |