Are all 3 poems in this connected? I hope so, i think they work well together. :)

Beautiful and sweet. I like the way you told it. :)

Aw, so sweet! :)

Aw. That was so good. It was really prertty and meaningful, especially about "lasting eternity" Could you review my stuff please, because you're so good? Thanks! THat was AMAZING!

~Little Miss Cullen Cutie~

"I wonder if you and me could last eternity".. phrasing is of. First it's you and I. Also you don't last eternity you can last for eternity or out last eternity.

The piece confused me a bit, but I did like the mixture of emotions. You expressed them well.

I think this is an interesting next piece in relation to the last one. It seems almost like it could be a flashback about the people in the first piece.

"I wish my heart was like an eagle, soaring across the land and catching your attention,"... I really like that imagery. It was great. I think you could use some more of this in the peice.

Also, the part about the name almost sounded like the person was conceited a bit, which didn't fit the character in my mind.

I did like the piece though it was really relateable.

"was the dreams, faith and hope of one person.".. I think it should be were

I like the piece because it's really sweet, true to life and full of emotion. However, the idea of having a special touch is a tad overused. Maybe trying to find a more poetic/different way to say it would be better?

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This is a really fresh concept and sentiment. My only wish was for it to be less concise, but you probably intended it to be like that, which upon reflection, I think actually adds to the impact. Beauty in simplicity kind of deal. You've got a wonderful talent, please keep writing!

You never know who that person is you could spend eternity with, it could be the person you least expect it to be. You just keep searching until you're absolutely sure. Good job. Keep it Up!

I love your name, I find that belle (beauty) is why I like it so much. Once again another wonderful piece. Bring back more from the old days. Keep it Up!

The first line is ever so true. All it takes to be inspired is that one person with the ''special touch'' and than we're bound for life. Great piece. Keep it Up!

The idea behind this piece is truly beautiful, yet somewhat sad.

Again, nice work.

This is a very beautiful piece.

I especially like the line:
I wish my heart was like an eagle, soaring across the land and catching your attention

Nice work with this.

This poem is very sweet and very inspirational.

Nice work with this!