So I was sort of right. Pomme sounds adorable. I want one.

They're going to get back to their room and the horned toddler will have stolen all their gold! Oh! And the dragon does have a horde. The horned toddler steals gold and gives it to the dragon to make his horde. So now they're gonna have to go fight the dragon for their money back.

THE END

A Dragon? Well hot damn, sign me up! And the minute Kenadie mentioned hot springs, I knew there was going to be some trouble of the naughty sorts. And your description of the town inside the cave was brilliant. I totally want to live there now.

This is liberally odd, but very good as well. Nice and colorful story you've made.

Little old ladies out in the middle of nowhere always spell trouble.

And that little black furry... Traito? gave me the heebie geebies. I have nightmares about furry black creatures staring at me on my bed at night. So I knew he was no good.

This ain't your grandad's Pokemon!

Shit, I'd turn around and go home, no matter how long it took me to find it. I'd rather starve with my parents than face razor toothed moles and acidic scorpions. You're not safe anywhere, Kendrick! Sharks in the water, scorpions in the desert, and yettis in the mountains. Good luck with all that.

Oh, this just screams Mark Twain. And they are rednecks, not southern, but your vernacular is pretty good. I'd have to agree that the Centreye don't sound all that... attractive, but to each his own. Giant eyeballs staring at me is just kinda creepy. How does it 'whinny?' Do they have mouths somewhere? Or... sound producing gills? I dunno. Also, I can't help but me mad at his parents. I'm sure they're doing this with the best of intentions, but it just feels like, "Well we don't want to try and make things better for you around here, so you can just get the hell out." Hopefully things will turn around some.