I really liked the breakdown at the end of the chapter. You did a good job with it. :)

ITS AMAZING!I WANT AVERY MAKE HIM REAL FOR ME! i like how gran is like you want to stay for dinner and then nathans like well can she stay forever and them shes like ... (serious)ok. i luv how im reviewing ur story as im at ur house and ur reading every word as i type it... lol! story time with kristen! woot!

omg sorry it took me so long to read and review this chapter. But it was amazing!i luved it! i hope that robyn can stay with nathan but i think if gran lets her or not nathan will sneak her in. lol i feel so bad for what happened and whats happening now to ryan/prince:( but i want robyn to be with nathan tho. well maybe idk who knows i guess it depends on how the story plays out. anyway this chapter is amazing but i didnt expect anything less:D nice job onee-chan!
luv ya! (in a non gay way)lol

I think you could have worried about the legal matters if time was all you were concerned about because either way you were super slow getting this one up(YOu know I'm just kidding except not really). Anyways... I liked this chapter for the most part. I liked the fact that you are bringing the story back to more of Robyn and Nathan. I also enjoyed the light-hearted humor. Keep it up.

The pacing wasn't too fast. I think it would have become a little boring if you included all of the legal issues that could have been mentioned. Can't wait to see how Gran reacts to Nathan's proposal.

It was not a sucky chapter! It was an unsucky chapter! :D I can't wait to see what happens in Zane's plan next!

WOOT! i have been dieing to read this chapter and it was really good!i feel so bad for prince/choi/ryan :( but i like nathan more so i want robyn to pick him! lol but i hope everything works out for ryan too.

Oh my god! It took you long enough! You know that you think to highly of me because you know that I am not nice especially when concerning patience. I'm so glad you put it up and I expect this long period of time to never happen again or I will see to it that your life is torture(just kidding, you know I would never do that... yet) Anyways. I love the chapter but I really want to hear more from Nathan and Robyn.

OMGOSH! THAT WAS SO INTENSE! MY EYES WERE GLUED TO THE SCREEN! *GASP* YAY! ryan emerges again! yay! dont worry - i thought the kidnap scene was REALLY good!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT!

OMG they kissed! GASP! And is Nathan's grandmother going to be an awesome grandma and let Robyn live with them? Because that would be cool. And Awesome. :P

so i FINALLY got to read this chapter first u took forever(But thats ok cuz the effort paid off) and then the website had a freakn glithch but i luvd it definetly worth waiting 4

oh really? ahaha, okay!

ofcourse i know BOA! i'll eat you up! your love your lovve~ i hope unnie does well here!
and i know! i would happily stalk them if they did some shows here! bigbang fighting!

lucky! i have no asian in me! but apparently i look half asian, to all my asian friends. O.o aha.

ahaha, i wouldn't care if he doesn't liked to be touch! he is too cute not to touch! ha, but i guess i would try to respect his wishes :P it would be hard though T_T

do you have IM or AIM, there are only so many chapters i can review too ha.

OMG !ryans back!but more importantly nathans getting really brave!lol but it payed off yayayayayayyaay! robyn kissed nathan!finally,woot!but whats going to happen with robyn if nathan has to move!oh no they might be seperated,they better not be seperated!they belong together! lol im very opinionated :)hehe

ugh! it won't let send a pm so i have to reply in review. ohwellz!
and yes i am HUGE korean fan. do you know 2PM? they are great too.

yes, they do look alike! i think so, maybe their jaw line?
hehehe. i just love how funny he is. he has a very quick sense of humor. i would marry that guy i swear!

i'm glad i found an asian lover! like myself. yes c: