I love this chapter its so funny! I really like how she’s becoming almost everyone’s friend and how she and William are with each other :] plz update soon !

Okay, I just started reading this earlier today and I couldn't stop. I love your characters and I really can't wait to see what happens next. I know it has been a while since you updated, so please update soon! If this was already in full book form, I think I would have finished it by now because it is such a page turner.
Thanks,
L.V.

AWW that was so cute.
so, William will chase away the monsters by sleeping with jack...sounds fun ;)
good chapter.
more please.

AWW that was so kewt except for the whole vampire sucking ur blood situation. And well that’s kind of creepy, I mean he’s everywhere u are and he can kill you in ur dream or imagination at any time...SCARY!
Well anyways I love ur story its so AWESOME I just cant get enough. plz update soon!

Amazing.

Aw! That is so sweet! *fan girl scream* I love william! XD Sorreh sorreh lmao. I love Jack too! Upload it faster will you woman! You ish a maken me a sad! lol Jk jk.

-Bec-

P.s Please do me a favour and review my story 'Cry of the Rebel' Please! Pretty please? I hope it isn't too much to ask... I know I sound deperate but.. *whispers* that's cause I'm starting to go down that road. lmao

Due to your lovely review request~! //
I want to leave you a heart felt review~ //

I want to say I LOVE YOUR STORY.

YES! I have said this ten million times, && YES i am saying it again. But does that mean the three words lose their value? NO!

As an author, I need to continue to boost up your ego as much as I can. WHY? so that we can read the end of a cute dramatic story in the making like this. :F Keep Writing!

I really like the way you wrote this story. I'm not sure how to describe but I just know that I really like it.

I feel really bad for Jack, so many terrible things happening to her. I can't imagine watching a vampire eating your dog. Poor Jack. But I'm glad that she has William, Seth and the werewolves to help her.

So are most vampires animal eaters except for the Vigée Le Bruns? Just wondering because Seth told Jack that vampires aren't all bad.

Anyway, I really want to see more Jack and William's relationship. ;) I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing.

seven pages! GOOD JOB!
she's what??
is she half werewolf now?
cant wait for the next update.

wow seven pages!
wow I love this chapter I can tell that its going to be interesting. And well I don’t know what to think about Hunter he seems….mysterious or something
Anyways I hope that Jack and William start to like each other more. And hopefully some drama comes along and well I kind of agree with SunlitSky about the whole character thing and the flirt and Seth being easy going and ALSO about LOVING it! :] BECAUSE ITS SUCH A GREAT STORY!
PLZ UPDATE SOON!

I just started reading your story last night and it intrigues me. I like that you have reversed the positions compared to many stories- the vampires are the bad guys. However, it does feel a little twilightish to me. She is just an ordinary girl (other than the name Jack- any reason?) and suddenly this attractive guy has this inexplicable interest in her. Nevertheless, I'm enjoying the story. It seems like there is going to be some drama in the coming chapters- perhaps a flirt at the wolf preserve?! It will be funny to see William's reaction. At this point I'm more of a fan of Seth than William; he's far more easygoing, though I'm sure that will change. Keep up the good work!

I love the new pack characters already:)
I wonder if Frances will come looking for her...hm
Thanks for the update!

ITS SEVEN PAGES LONG?!

You mean the chapter in itself or the whole thing..? O_o?

lmao I love this storreh! And I have been reading it and I do sincerly know exactly how you feel when you see the hits and the reviews.

Ugh It disgusts me... It's perposterous! (lmao going overly dramatic there)

Please update! It's a great story!

-Bec-

P.s I love Will! XD

hahaha I loved this chapter it seems as if they are starting to like each other more KEWT!!
and i have to agree with *Rosey-Blue* the splinter part was hilarious & ending was really KEWT! and I love Seth he seems so cool.
Cant wait to read wut happens next![:

let the adventure begin!!
the part with the splinter was so funny.
the ending was cute :)
looking forward to more
update, please?