Great job! Your story inexplicably interests me! Haha :P Looking forward to the first chapter ..

Hmm, Im not usually a fan of teenage romance stories but being a male I found reading this story from a females point of view a bit more interesting. Surprisingly enough I actually read with interest (which is an accomplishment for this site I assure you). My only point of criticism is the bit about "stabs of words that were like knives," It just sounded a bit awkward to me. Beyond that, everything is good I look forward to reading more.