The name 'David' reminded me of the biblical King David, so I loved that you made him 'modern' by placing him in China, while still referring to his statues. I liked that even in stone he can 'heal' this girl. What a nice little piece. Keep up the great work. (:

Woah very good piece here. Quite thought-provoking. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

It was very abstract, yet you grounded it with several iconic imagery - China/bamboo, the economy - which helped to modernize it. I can tell that it's deeply personal to you. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.