Ohh me likey:) You can tell that you're a writer and not just a poet (same difference, I know).
I know that this review is just overbearingly helpful, and I'm sorry that I can't think of anything more to say.
It's well written.
I liked it.
That's all I got.

"Darkness." I love this opening. It's so simple and effective.

"I get the real you." I like that the speaker is able to 'let her guard down' for this person. I think she needs to let her friends see the 'real' her. If they don't like who she really is then they're not true friends.

"I was going to say horrible." Oh no! That's so mean! It's realistic, though. Good dialogue writing here.

Aww, the ending is really cute. I liked this. :)

I enjoyed reading this =] It was really portrayed well.
I love the way you use loads of pathetic falasy in your stories which makes it even more interesting!
Good job! =]