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stranger 2009-11-23 . chapter 7
plz CONTINUE!! nice chapter btw..
Dramatic Irony 2009-11-20 . chapter 7
Hm, interesting...I sense a possible new romantic interest in the air for Raylin (and Viper will have to endure more of Lucas's stalking), though I must say that Damien Pierce seems interested in Raylin, but if he seriously wants to date her, he's got his work cut out for him. Character interaction is realistic and sharp as ever.

Keep writing! Try to update regularly. :)
greensmilingme13 2009-11-11 . chapter 6
hey. yeah. i am asking you, with all the graces of the people in the heavens or whatever, to please, please, PLEASE, continue. this story is just too good to NOT continue. I stuck with the first story, a while back, and was wicked depressed or whatever with that ending of such a good story. If you leave me hanging, i will have to do something irrational. I'm not sure what it is yet...but it will not be, at all merciful! But seriously, continue. If you even get this, dont ignore it.
Cal 2009-10-18 . chapter 6
goshh tat was a great chapterXD! PLZPLZPLZ UPDATE?:)
someone:D 2009-10-18 . chapter 6
OMG THAT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER! :D:D:D
ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE SOON?
PLZPLZPLZPLZ
(: 2009-10-12 . chapter 6
OMG WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?!
Mary 2009-10-03 . chapter 6
Right. i lov yr stories so
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE LOL!
plz \o/
:D
afan 2009-09-29 . chapter 6
jesus i check your page everyday
haha
its addiction

i hope you wld update! loveya!
afan 2009-09-25 . chapter 6
i like the story!
i really hope your promos are over cos i wanna read more more more baby!
haha gogogo!

yourfan [;
Dramatic Irony 2009-09-20 . chapter 6
Loved the extra dose of wit in this chapter. The last line was priceless.

Entertaining turn of events here. I can just imagine Raylin's grimaces throughout the photo shoot. Wonder where things will take off next after this cliffhanger. Keep writing!
lalala 2009-08-25 . chapter 5
haha! they are hilarious. i love how it ended!
winata 2009-08-25 . chapter 5
oh my god...lucas! he is such a breath of fresh air. best.damn.character.ever.

haha i don't really know what else to say right now, i already have told you all my comments :P
Dramatic Irony 2009-08-20 . chapter 5
I never noticed this before, but why are your stories signed "By LiLin"?
Dramatic Irony 2009-08-19 . chapter 5
The character interaction never fails to amuse me.

Speaking of characters, I don't really have a favorite. Naturally, I just like to watch the relationships progress, particularly that of the leads, haha.

Good luck on your promotional exam (whatever that is...) Don't forget to keep writing when it's done!
Arianna.is.the.Shit 2009-08-19 . chapter 5
lol i laughed cause you only have friends to bring you junk food when you have a breakup and then ditch you when your crush comes around and makeup the stupidest excuses to get away and Raylin's reaction was rather strong towards the movie
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