I have to say I don't like the format here. At first I thought maybe it was a play on being complicated, but I don't think so. I think some level of bolding, spacing, etc. works well in pieces, but this got to be a bit much especially in that last line. Plus, spelling the word heartt wrong and using to semi-colons is just gramatically wrong.

I do like the piece though because keeping what you love close is so simple and yet so complicated. I think you bring that idea bout interestingly by using the girl.

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