| Reviews for Battle Scars |
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Minkaos 3/30/13 . chapter 1I really liked it. It was heartfelt, cute and adorable. I'm glad that Tucker and Amy ended up together. |
behind this mask 3/1/13 . chapter 1Loved it! Is there/will be a sequel? |
color outside the lines 2/2/13 . chapter 1Awww! :) Tucker is adorable! Tristan's a ego-inflated jerk and Amy is amazing! I loved how you began the story! You had my attention from the first line. Tucker and Amy's relationship is so cute! It's stories like this that make me want a boyfriend! The whole idea of being locked in a room with someone was amazing! The flow of the story was wonderful and you barely noticed how long it was. By the end your like, "Man, that was short." But then you realize just how long it was! I really enjoyed this. :) |
mandymonster 1/27/13 . chapter 1 It's solo friggin good:) I wish it was a full blown book:/ |
MyPrincessEnding 1/22/13 . chapter 1I thought it was a really good story. There were a few mistakes here and there but nothing serious. The plot of the story was unique and very creative. xoxo, JustWish |
Sparklingjewel12 1/21/13 . chapter 1I LOVE these kind of stories :) |
Guest 1/8/13 . chapter 1 I love love love love this SO much! :) |
StealingChristmasLights 1/6/13 . chapter 1I liked it, but I have some good and bad things to point out. 1) You could've added way more detail, there was so many oppurtunities where you could've added a few extra words, and that makes all the difference. 2) It was all kinda rushed, and I understand that you neeeded to fit it into a one-shot, but that doesn't change the facts, but you can't really do much about that. 1) I loved the characters, even if I don't feel like I know them as well as I could I tik you're on a good road with them 2) I like how you ended it with the thing about never being one of his battle scars, that was sweet! 3) The intro thingy was funny, I read 'so I'm not getting any tonight' and was like 'dafuq?!' but it made me laugh :) I hop you relize that this isn't a flame, I am honestly giving you advice, that's the only way we can become better writers :) - StealingChristmasLights x |
Guest 12/25/12 . chapter 1 One word: Magnificent Loved this story! |
HeadOverHeelsInHate 12/18/12 . chapter 1Awww! Cute! Love it. I liked how they talked about all his scars. |
DA-chen1 12/2/12 . chapter 1That was soo sweet! Really great.. a bit too clicheƩ but that's okay! :-) Tucker has a real character, not this shallow shell of a man like his brother! Mira |
Guest 11/12/12 . chapter 1 I loved it you should write more :) |
I caught myself 9/29/12 . chapter 1This was incredible. I noticed a few spelling/gramatical errors which are so trivial i won't bother. This is really something beautiful and you are a brilliant author. Thank you so much for sharing this. I really enjoyed reading it. Brooke |
heal me forever 9/13/12 . chapter 1dis is wat can i say SPEECHLESS seriously i mean it...! dis is like i right now have tears in my eyes...! deir is no sad end but stillur stry MOVED ME... so much u said in one shot where ppl cant say in many chapters |
CookieWonderhead 8/17/12 . chapter 1I have read this story a thousand times already and I can't seem to get tired of it. I love the characters: how Amy is so tough on the outside but soft on the inside, and how she stands up for herself and what she wants. Or how Tucker is so insecure but completely in love with her. They are great. I would love for you to write something more about them :) |