Great writing but the fight scene was a little difficult for me to read. I was trying to visualize the fight but it seemed awkward. I loved it otherwise..nice attention to detail.

I found this story the morning of one of my math exams. Can you guess how much study got done that day? Brilliant story. I loved everything about it. Am now definately going to work my way through the rest of your works. Welldone!

Wow! This story is awesome, and I can't understand why it doesn't have more reviews! =(

I love it ... you have such an awesome idea and plotline going here + I adore the title! xD

The only criticism I have is that Leah told Andrew she was a secret agent on the first night they met. I found that a teense bit odd, but other than that, this story is rockin'.

~JEM!

Wow, you update faster than I can review. Love the story, but I think you need to be careful with the point of view because sometimes it is a bit confusing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I liked this :) its a bit of an odd story, but i like how you wrote it.