I love the apocalyptic tone, especially 'I am going to watch fall fall.'

Also, something I've noticed in all of your poems: they have love shapes :) I'm obsessed with structure etc & try to make my lines as regular as possible, but your varying lengths really add to the emotions, particularly long or short lines bring spice to the voice. Really well done!

I really had to think about this. But I think that just makes me appreciate it more. :]

I really liked it. Very thought provoking, its making me think lots. Very well worded, I really enjoyed it :)