Been there. Done that.

i totally sympathise.
You're writing my story i think love.

Poetry...how bad I am at understanding it!! But I liked the terseness of this and the occasional rhyme. The scene is all too familiar also, either for a woman or a man. It doesn't matter. If I wrote poetry, which I don't, it would be quick and punchy like this with short lines and piercing images. I think you have talent, even though I am not the best audience for poetry or any kind of verse.

a ** because the world says you are.
a ** because you say you are.
this is great. i just hope its not 100% true =/

holy crap you have a gift and if this is how you truly feel then i apologize for everyone. such an obviously amazing person should not feel so terrible

I like this. I can picture it all and it seems very deep to me. Nice job.

Yeah, really good. Depressing and bleak, but good. I don't know a damn thing about poetry but I liked somewhere in the middle how it was unrhythmic? and then with the line 'sneak out with the morning light' you put it back into place, it was really satisfying.

Wow.

This is really good.

The reader can really feel the emotion
and frustration in this piece showing
the what you put into this.

Again, nice work with this piece.