|Reviews for Panic At Midnight|
| RainbowNightmares 10/11/09 . chapter 1
| Scarlett Water Immortal 8/3/09 . chapter 1
scary...then funny...! I read this at midnight and i dream that happened to me...except i dont have a brother...!
| Phoenix Octavia Bright 7/25/09 . chapter 1
You should make the text less block format-like. You should also use your commas more wisely and try to organize the text a bit better.
Internet reading is different then book reading, and its a bit annoying when th text is as blocky as yours. I used to do it to, and a lot of people told me that it was harder for them to concentrate on my story.
I found it a bit hard to concentrate on the text, but again, I see potential, and if you work on it, hey who knows?
Keep working on it