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u didnt6 really persuade me

Nice story. I bit dull though if you heard goldilocks and the three bears before though. I like the last line of this though. Youre last lines are always good btw.

cool!

Interesting take on the story BUT I still side with the bears lol

Haha! Goldilocks is so funny! It's true anyway, they should stop putting and writing and telling one-sided fairy tales! Poor antagonists.

This is funny! It sort of shows Goldilocks' character, and how she didn't just barge in and take over. (BTW, in the little book that I use to read, the Bears actually invite Goldilocks to lunch, but that's not the traditional version)

There's some spelling, like- "luckily the last chair didn't brake" it should be "break", and "Getting up I tried apologising" should be "apologizing" but overall, it's a funny read.

Thanks for reviewing my story, High School Bleachers! I really appreciate it! :D

lol. love it

Ha. Cute. Poor Goldilocks.