|Reviews for Goldilocks And The Three Bears The True Story|
| Del'kiyaRa'shaye 8/29/12 . chapter 1
| Davii 4/25/12 . chapter 1
I Luvv Itt
| ata 5/25/10 . chapter 1
u didnt6 really persuade me
| TymCon 10/17/09 . chapter 1
Nice story. I bit dull though if you heard goldilocks and the three bears before though. I like the last line of this though. Youre last lines are always good btw.
| RainbowNightmares 10/11/09 . chapter 1
| Varelie 9/13/09 . chapter 1
Interesting take on the story BUT I still side with the bears lol
| Feyerah Klydell Evvs 8/5/09 . chapter 1
Haha! Goldilocks is so funny! It's true anyway, they should stop putting and writing and telling one-sided fairy tales! Poor antagonists.
| jake Chan 7/23/09 . chapter 1
This is funny! It sort of shows Goldilocks' character, and how she didn't just barge in and take over. (BTW, in the little book that I use to read, the Bears actually invite Goldilocks to lunch, but that's not the traditional version)
There's some spelling, like- "luckily the last chair didn't brake" it should be "break", and "Getting up I tried apologising" should be "apologizing" but overall, it's a funny read.
Thanks for reviewing my story, High School Bleachers! I really appreciate it! :D
| Grasspaw 7/9/09 . chapter 1
lol. love it
| Amaury 7/6/09 . chapter 1
Ha. Cute. Poor Goldilocks.