Woah, I have no idea what just happened...
Will there be clarification in the next chapter, 'cause I'm mad lost.
I like Lee too though. He gonna be stickin' around as a character?
Keep writing, por favor!

Really great chapter I love it. keep up the good work and update soon please.

Don't worry, I love being able to base characters off of hot guys. It makes the world a much easier place! Update soon, I'm looking forward to it.

dundundun!
I like chess;;she's hella cool, lmaoo.
HAHA. I base my characters off of hot guys at my school too, soo...

...Wait, what? -confused in a good way-

o! i like this story. Suddenly you have a willing fan for this to be updated every single day.

This is great so far! Perfect name for a sadistic jackass! lol

ok Emily...before I read your story...shocker right! I've never actually read any of your stories on here but the chapter title caught my eye. Did you happen to get Winner, winner, chicken dinner from watching 21?? lol

Huh, wonder who Ave Brisinger is...but that's the sign of a good story! Update soon!

I love me a good buildup! >_< You're a tease. All hints and nothing concrete. I get the feeling the earl deals in blood production. Seriously this story is doing my head in. And Jack! Jack's sexy no matter what he looks like. Isthis the bad boy syndrome that girl's usually get because i cant help but hope that sophie can change him. =P Longest review i ever wrote.

JESUS HORATIO BRICK ** CHRIST HE MAKES BABY WINE!
D8
Sorry for the blasphemy...
XP

i love Jack. Really. End of story. Please update soon!

Adored the new chapter. I especially liked the vaguely romance-charged scene where Jack has Sophie against the wall. Loved it.

As for constructive criticism, I can't say anything about commas, because I'm a comma-** too. You did, however, use some apostrophes in wrong places. Like "It's" when it should have just been "Its." That happened a few times. But that's fine. Nothing wrong with some slight grammatical errors. I know I make them.

Please, please, please continue this story because I LOVE it! ♥

I love your story so far, its really good. Please update soon, thank!! ^_^

Wow! I love this chapter I will be reading the second one next. Good job. n_n