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I Murder on Impulse 2009-10-22 . chapter 7
Aww sad but it's going great!! Can't wait :D

xx
Ali
Alenor 2009-07-19 . chapter 7
hey, great chappie. i don't mind the time jump, you've made it work. it'll be interesting to see what happens with the take-over and who's working where etc. can't wait ~ Alenor
-RaNdOm PaNdAmOdIuM liVeR- 2009-07-16 . chapter 7
Awesome!
CATpuccino. 2009-07-16 . chapter 7
Dang. You sure do update fast. I'm really glad about it ;P
It's funny how Richard and Robert think so differently. But I guess the fun will actually begin now? I mean the next chap?
Hazelnut Romance 2009-07-16 . chapter 7
there sounds like there is gonna be a lot of drama building up! update update update!
Alenor 2009-07-16 . chapter 6
hmm...interesting. he actually realised he was an idiot? huh, he does have a brain it seems, lol. can't wait for more ~ Alenor
CATpuccino. 2009-07-15 . chapter 6
Ack the names in the original were Christina & James. lol yeah I remember that now. You're right this one is totally different but still good. Glad you've updated.
-RaNdOm PaNdAmOdIuM liVeR- 2009-07-15 . chapter 5
I love your story , it is awesome!
-RaNdOm PaNdAmOdIuM liVeR- 2009-07-15 . chapter 6
I am liking your story so far.

Please continue with it.

I absolutely love it!
Luxesia 2009-07-15 . chapter 6
Can't wait for the next chapter
Hazelnut Romance 2009-07-15 . chapter 6
oh! a bit more drama. update soon!
CATpuccino. 2009-07-14 . chapter 5
You rewrite it, don't you? I like it tho ;)
Alenor 2009-07-14 . chapter 5
oh another great chappie. i'm glad to hear that eve is resilient, hope she doesn't have to demonstrate in too hard a way though! she really should mention who her dad is to him soon though...can't wait for more ~ Alenor
Alenor 2009-07-13 . chapter 4
haha, weekends do indeed include friday, you're forgiven. friends and social lives are important :) this was a great chappie, i can't wait for more. although matt's starting to show his workaholic side a bit more, i hope eve doesn't get too disappointed ~ Alenor
Piratina 2009-07-13 . chapter 1
You said his name is Matthew Clements and Matthew Reed in the fourth paragraph. Edit.
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