This has so much emotion in it, not to mention some really nice phrases. I feel the ache that is portrayed in the last few lines. Great job.

"I dream of your silent hands," was probably my favorite in the piece. Beautiful.

I can totally relate to this girl...you make your narrators' emotions come to life. Wonderful work!
~Lessa

"the way my body would wake up for you" I like the wording in that. As if she's only alive around him. The thought is sweet and the line sounded very smooth in the context.

"i place them in front of you" The vulnerability in that was wonderful. :) It was 'raw'. And believable.

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-Kate

"I place them in front of you." The tone of this line is so powerful--the speaker allows herself to become 'vulnerable' by placing her 'eyes' in front of another. "I will just be another page in your story." Good line. It ties the poem together nicely.

"i know that i will just be another page in your story of blue-eyed girls." Absolutely love that line. I like the way you wrote this, it flows really smoothly. Really great work! :)

wow. i really like it. and i'm quite flattered that this was inspired by my eyes, haha. :D you're truly a great poet.

This is beautiful!
Lovvee it!
Especially the last few lines.