i really like this. the repetitiveness of "she" was a tad much by the end, but it didn't overshadow the message of this story. i can see this girl, and i feel like i know someone like her, so lost in the world, so afraid of not being liked, that they sacrifice themself in order to fit in. you paint a lovely picture that is very relateable.

the ending really tied everything together, like a mantra of universal truths. i'm not sure if you mean to continue on with this, since i think it stands perfectly on its own.

either way, excellent work! keep writing!