Okay I do think this dragged on a bit. There was definitely some unnecessary details, and though I do like developed oneshots, I think this one crossed the limit a little. I also think this was incredibly cliche and the writing could have been more polished.
But this was really cute, and I'm glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2.

so cute and funny! good job! =)

Well thought out and well developed. I liked it a lot. It sure made up for not having a Seven Alphas chapter.

Sian x

Ah, has me grinning insanely!

Okay, my cheeks are starting to hurt.

I adored it! Absolutely LOVED it!

I can't stop clapping hehe

Love it

L
-x-

That was soo sweet!!

aw that was cute!

I really, really liked this! Nice work!

Aww it was such a cute/sweet story.
A couple of things though:
1. He asked for black tea but then it talks about black coffee.
2. It says twice her little brother is five but then he says he is nine.
Again an absolutly awesome story.
Gup :)
PS. Could you please do a one shot on Neil

Thanks for the story. I'd love to see an update on your 7 story, but I'll take a one-shot any day!;)

I like this story, minus the several spelling mistakes.. (:

aw so cute!
and omg. completely irrelavent.
but OH BACK IN THE DAYS WHEN I DID DT.

I have a extreme hate for folios now.

Lol, this is so cute! I really enjoyed it, but there were two parts that really confuse me. One was when Nina was taking Joseph's order of Black Tea and then it changed to Black Coffee. Another one was when you had Nina introduce Sasha to Joseph at the Easter party, but earlier on you stated that Nina got Sasha alone with Joseph twice when school was about to end. Just thought I'd let you know in any case. Great job though! :)

Aw so cute!

xx

OMG!
29 pages of awesome!?
I LOVE YOU!
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very, very cute.
i got what they were doing, like, near the middle.
so, i wasn't COMPLETELY dense. :P

Lmao!! I loved the ending bit! Your one-shots are all so sweet and adorable!!