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LeahDude 2009-08-30 . chapter 2
I really love this. It's the perfect ending to Fiend by the Bay. I really, really love it. It's weird because I feel like this should be in with the first one because of it's shortness but I like the ending of the other so this would seem like a sort of a weird trailer-ending. But I really did love it. I love Ethan's character and him and Beau - they're amazing together. Really love it. It was amazing.
suninun 2009-07-17 . chapter 2
only a two chapter sequel? cry
AnnaG.Luv 2009-07-16 . chapter 2
Cute. Though I am a little surprised Beau didn't say I love you back.
nennella 2009-07-16 . chapter 2
I liked this chapter so much, especially the way Ethan tries to ackwnoledge his feelings and talk to Beau. I hope to read something more about them!
JtheChosen1 2009-07-15 . chapter 2
Nice happy ending!
nennella 2009-07-09 . chapter 1
I'm glad to read something about Ethan and Beau! It's a good story: the way Ethan struggle with his issues is believable. I hope that everything will work out in the end! I look forward to reading next chapter.
JtheChosen1 2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Very nice work!
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