i love it.
it's like, i love you so much that i'd go through
all seven deadly sins...just to be with you. gah.
the only suggestion i would make is for formatting.
in the envy section, if you were to separate 2nd line into
"of all the girls who
come near you,
talk to you,
smile at you,
aren't me;"
i think it'd be a little easier to follow. but that's a minor detail.

i loved gluttony. :)

I like this :) The seven deadly sins have always been so interesting to me, and I love how you sort of made them all revolve around the same situation- very nice. Great job :)