write more
its so good!
please...

Great start for your new story.

Lol this sounds really interesting. Ive got you on Alert so please update soon!

Lovely story so far. When the three brothers walked in and were describe, it reminded me of twilight, except Derrick seems much more different compared to Edward Cullen. Anyway please do update asap, this is totally gripping.

Interesting interesting... Can't wait for more!