Wow, that was beautiful. Your imagery, especially.

"summer embodied" in the first line just truly captures the essence of your writing. So beautiful.

"wine red hair and heart, blowing kisses and leaving napkin notes." i found that to be stunning. i can pciture this girl.

"she'll hitch a ride on the back of the wind"
unique and a great image.


beautiful work, overall.




I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work! It would mean a lot.