The last part kinda reminded me of Twilight. And when you mentioned Rini's name from Sailor Moon I was like Oh my Gid I miss watching that show.

C.D.

Interesting...more please hehe XD

hey read my stories and poems pleasee heeheh

Interesting. I like it a lot, and I can't wait to see how it ties in with the prologue and the fable.

Interesting. Any more?

Ah man, don't stop there! Seriously, now I'm curious. Great flow to the story and I really want to see how you pull this one off. Don't leave me hanging!