Ha ha! This is probably my favorite chapter you've written :) Not that the others weren't also great, but the humor in it really worked. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sighh, aren't they precious in that rough piratey sort of way ;). Are we going to hear any more of Peter? I liked the boy and am curious about him since his papa doesn't seem like the nicest person on the planet. Anyway another good chapter and I eagerly await the next one!

This chapter was sweet and all, but how long has it been since she's eaten? 4 maybe 5 days? She should be dead by now and fairly dehydrated.

Wonderful diction and flow of writing in this piece.

I'll be checking out more as you post :)

When you say another chapter is coming out soon you sure mean soon. I approve :D. Another great chapter. I'm pretty sure I had a pretty stupidly big grin on my face when the dragon's teeth were mentioned. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really like this story and am really interested in what is going to happen next!

Aw :) Next chapter! Next chapter!

Oh, is the captain have the same cleanliness as the crew? Is he by any means handsome?

Hm, a sense of foreboding is definitely present.