;; This is just... so sad! I feel so sorry for Gordon. I can't imagine losing the person I love that way. Thank you for writing this, even though it did make me cry, it was worth the tears.

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I loved this story! The end was so sad and so sweet.

That was beautiful, I'm think I'mabout to cry thatwas enchanting. Thank you very muuch for taking the time to write it

YES! SHE FELL IN LOVE WITH GORDON!OMG THIS IS SO AMAZING I CANNOT IMAGINE I CAN'T BELIEVE IM COMMENTING ON THIS EEEEEEEEEEK! SO AMAZING!

SON OF A BITCH!I'LL KILL YOU PAINFULLY AFTER MUCH TORTURE!

ughhhhhh. Must resist wanting to kill her parents!

UGH!SONS OF BITCHES! I WANT TO KILL THEM!

ugh,her parents are sons of bitches.

That was good and sad, loved it. It was a beautiful story. You did wonderful.

You should tryy and get this published. It's an amazing story.

This story is so amazing! It actually made me cry...

This was a good story, little sad and read like an oral story sounds (meaning no elaborate descriptions) and less like a novel but it mimicked the story in that way. It was unique and unlike any thing else I've read. Good writing

I am so happy to have come across this incredible story. Sad and happy, mingled with relief. Rocatis deserved a happy life. I actually let out a strangled cry when it first mentioned her niece "Boriage". Too many feelings, I can hardly articulate it well enough through have a truly magical style of writing and storytelling. Keep up the fantastic work :)

very sad but i don't see how else you couldn't of ended the story

i enjoyed it

That was a wonderful. I am glad that I decided to look at your page after rereading another of your stories.