"Clinging to it like a second skin." Good simile. The imagery here is stunning.

"I can't live." The tone of this line is very striking--the angst and pain is very prominent.

"I hope that being alone is better than dying together." This ending is so sorrowful--wow! :D

LOved the lines:

"It’s probably time to tear the ivy from my limbs

In hope that being alone

Is better than dying together

Forever dependent on you"

The idea of the poem was cool too, and very realistic:)

"It’s probably time to tear the ivy from my limbs

In hope that being alone

Is better than dying together

Forever dependent on you"

I loved those lines! Great work! =D

love the metaphore :)

I loved this poem for the simple reason that it was all so true! =D I really have nothing more to say here, only, good job =]